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tasks:zoht [2018/08/11 02:15] – inaritasks:zoht [2021/07/30 13:51] (current) – external edit 127.0.0.1
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 Replace all " +" and "+ " with "+" a couple times if you concur! Replace all " +" and "+ " with "+" a couple times if you concur!
 +<IN: TODO: SOME ENTRIES FIXED BUT NOT ALL>
  
 Lust is a linked word on the last couple things, but not elsewhere. Do you want  Lust is a linked word on the last couple things, but not elsewhere. Do you want 
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 but it's often used in very non-social situations by players. I might just move  but it's often used in very non-social situations by players. I might just move 
 this up to Basic Moves. this up to Basic Moves.
 +<FIXED: MOVED TO INTERJECTIONS>
  
  
 Hustle and Bustle: Hustle and Bustle:
 "You will need to wait or travel" - if it has an "or", it's probably two things. "You will need to wait or travel" - if it has an "or", it's probably two things.
 +<IN: EXPLICIT BINARY OR>
 +
 "You will draw unwanted attention or let others know." - Although this one  "You will draw unwanted attention or let others know." - Although this one 
 seems pretty much fine, since those are the same consequence said differently. seems pretty much fine, since those are the same consequence said differently.
 +<IN: FIXED>
  
 Interfere: Interfere:
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 things is a crime, it's inconsistent phrasing. We refer to them as attacks  things is a crime, it's inconsistent phrasing. We refer to them as attacks 
 elsewhere. elsewhere.
 +<IN: FIXED-ISH>
  
 Give It: Give It:
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 (If you have three choices and two of them are "remove a debility," you don't  (If you have three choices and two of them are "remove a debility," you don't 
 actually have three choices.) actually have three choices.)
 +<IN: FIXED>
  
 Tease: Tease: